better, - but. shes got a handk coming out of her head, she has bubble snad a fish sticking out of her back and shoulder. and alswo white bubbles comeing out of her head again. I think those things need to be cloned out - or replaced with something not as ovvious, but- stuff coming out of her head is a big no no - and is very distracting.
also with the 2 3 fingers coming out of her right side (our left side while looking at her).. those need to be removed all togheter.. looks like something is grabbing her from behind........ everything else is okay, althoug her hand placement on the lap seems forced.. She should turn her hand out -and have the fingers pointing UP towards the top of the lam shad... (am i making sense?) LOVE THE BLACK AND WHITE!!!!
weird crop.. youneed to brop more aboove at her waist or show the leggs, you can't crop off like that, she looks missing appendages. everything from gher top of the skin starts on the chest to the armas and face is a great start, fine tweaking is need a mit, like putting the elbow closer toghet and furhter away from the face a few in ches to get rid of that weir shados on the right side of her face.
Also, yould have photoshopped the wrinkles in her armmpits, and the neck 'point' jutting out down to her chest. Her face sould be the subject, the falloff subject should be the background - just to tye everything in.
plus you can see the Pins that are holding her dress toether right there on the side... and hair pieces are sticking to her back. again a little distracting.
Great idea - great toughts... just need some major fixing and you could have a killer shot.
again, id crop from the top of the blouse up, since it is just a messy wrinkly shirt with stick pins or safetly pins holding her together. She is a lovely girl thouhg!!!!
(do you mind me tell you this stuff? Thisi s what it is for (for critiquing, right?)
you should dodge out the lighthouse though to bring the eye to it more.. and - just a thought... dodge out the mossy part of the rocks in front and to the left of the foreground of the image!!! theres a TON of detail there you can pull out. I can help you there too if you like.
hey Herry, Would you mind lettting me work on this one for you?
I have some ideas.. Ill give the original image and the worked on image sent back to you. I have a great ideal on how to bring out those details. You have alot there.
love it! the whites are a little cyan though... nice comp
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