Thanks a lot for your comments. I really appreciate contructive criticism: it's what everybody needs to improve. I know the focus is not perfect (it was reaaly difficult to focus properly in low artificial light with a makro-planar) but the result seemed to me nice after all.
z-enthusiast wrote:
I would like it better, if the model would look with her big eyes, straight into the camera! That the eyes not in crisp focus, is not disturbing, at least for me!\n\n\n
Art and nature: I have shot something similar with dance and nature.
If you wish you can look at: Umberto http://umbe1958.leicaimages.com
I particularly like the this "dittico" and the first image.
Lovely composition! Wish it has a little less grain...\n\n\n
Thank you! I think the grain is the combined result of the harsh light, the lens and probably the scan I did some years ago (maybe I should try to do it again).
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z-enthusiast wrote:
I would like it better, if the model would look with her big eyes, straight into the camera! That the eyes not in crisp focus, is not disturbing, at least for me!\n\n\n